Wednesday, April 29, 2015

My ANZAC writing




My Learning Reflection
In my writing today I was learning to describe what it may have been like to be a soldier in WWI. My writing shows that I could use descriptive language (adjectives) to create images in the readers mind of the devastation of war. I also used direct speech correctly.
Next Learning Steps
  • Use punctuation better
  • Paragraphs in my writing
Pak Heights Learner Dispositions
Self-Manager, Communicator, Challenge Taker, Team Player, Investigator, Thinker
During this work I was a good Challenge Taker because I persisted and completed the task.  I stayed focussed and didn't disrupt and other learners.  I also was a good investigator as I research several sources of information to find out what it was like in the war and think I did a great job at showing this.

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